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August 31, 2005

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Unky Mark

E1.
Your first sentence contains a misplaced modifier.
"People" is the subject of the sentence. "People" aren't the occasional softball umpire nor the all-around knowledgable guy. YOU are.
Better: "As I am an occasional..."
Or: "Since I am..."

Unky Mark

E1.
Your first sentence contains a misplaced modifier.
"People" is the subject of the sentence. "People" aren't the occasional softball umpire nor the all-around knowledgable guy. YOU are.
Better: "As I am an occasional..."
Or: "Since I am..."

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